Perfect. By Max Amato. Scholastic. $16.99.
There are so many variations on the
“opposites attract” and “apparent enemies can turn out to be fast friends”
themes in picture books for young children that it is always surprising when an
author comes up with a new one. That is just what Max Amato has done in Perfect. Starting with photographs of a
pencil and an eraser – the pink-parallelogram type, not the kind on the pencil
itself – Amato gives these characters simple but expressive faces with a few
lines and shapes, then sets them against each other. They are, after all,
opposites: the pencil makes marks on pages and the eraser removes them. They
are also expressive opposites: the eraser narrates the book, while the pencil
expresses itself entirely by drawing – or, from the eraser’s viewpoint, by messing
up all the nice clean pages.
Any child who has read books about
unlikely friendships will see where the book is going, but that will not
matter: the fun is in how it goes
there. The pencil (whose drawing portion is the only part that Amato shows,
thereby avoiding the issue of whether it has an eraser of its own on top)
repeatedly spoils things for the self-satisfied eraser. “No pencil can mess
with me,” the eraser says at one point on a left-hand page, and sure enough,
the facing, right-hand page is completely white, just as the eraser likes it.
But turn the page and the eraser lets out an exasperated, “Hey!” The reason is
that, on the next right-hand page,
the pencil has drawn a really silly caricature of the eraser, complete with the
“No pencil can mess with me” comment.
The eraser runs through that drawing, of
course, erasing most of it, but cannot quite catch the pencil, which draws a
squiggle that soon develops tornado-like intensity and blows the eraser right
off the page. The eraser lands on a later page filled with shading that the
pencil has done – and before the eraser can remove any of it, an army of huge,
angry-looking pencils suddenly shows up. They are in fact simply drawn by the
pencil, but the drawings are soon chasing the eraser toward what turns out to
be a thick forest drawn, of course, in pencil and by the pencil. “I’ll never be
able to fix all of this,” the eraser laments, giving way to frustration with a
series of inarticulate shouts. But then – in some of Amato’s cleverest drawings
– the eraser figures out how to erase part
of the pencil shading that is all over the page, creating through the erasures
(that is, with white space) a rocket ship in which the eraser can ride speedily
around the page, erasing more and more of it and finally escaping onto a couple
of nice, tidy white pages.
Unfortunately for the eraser, at this
point the realization dawns that being “perfectly clean” is not really all that
much fun – and Amato shows the character, in a small size, right in the middle
of an otherwise completely white page, wearing an unhappy frown. This is
clearly the setup for a rapprochement. The eraser shouts “Hey!” and the pencil
obligingly drops down from the top of the page, creating a squiggle pattern
above the top of the now-smiling eraser. And then the pencil does more and more
shading, filling the page with darkness similar to what previously went into
the forest. And then the eraser uses
the same technique as before to remove some
of the dark area, this time to create the letter “P.” And that becomes the
first letter of the word “Perfect,” which appears on the book’s final page as
eraser and pencil, reconciled and now obviously enjoying each other’s company,
look smilingly out at the reader. There is nothing very unusual in the
underlying plot of Perfect, and even
the idea of animated drawing tools is not new: crayons, pens, paintbrushes and
other objects have featured in plenty of children’s books. But Perfect is nevertheless special, thanks
to the clever ways in which Amato builds the book around the real-world
characteristics of pencils and erasers. The pages on which the pencil creates
shapes and shades really look as if they have been done in pencil, and when the
eraser passes through penciled areas, little eraser bits are left behind, as
they would be with a real eraser. Perfect
is fun and funny, and kids will enjoy seeing the ways in which the two
characters get on each other’s nerves for a while and then decide they are
better off cooperating than remaining in conflict. That is a simple message, to
be sure, but certainly a worthwhile one – and all the better for being so
entertainingly presented.
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